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雅思写作之议论文写作技巧讲解(4)

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雅思写作考试,考察的写作种类很多,所运用的写作技巧也是不尽相同,今天小编就给大家分享一下雅思写作之议论文写作技巧讲解(4),希望能够帮助大家备考,一起来看看吧。 八面玲

 雅思写作考试,考察的写作种类很多,所运用的写作技巧也是不尽相同,今天小编就给大家分享一下雅思写作之议论文写作技巧讲解(4),希望能够帮助大家备考,一起来看看吧。

  八面玲珑拓展法写作实例

  3、Health/environment

  吃太多的快餐有害健康,因为不少快餐含有太多脂肪,糖分和热量。

  Eating too much fast food is physically damaging, for fast foodcontains excessive fat, sugar and calorie.

  青少年正处于长身体的阶段,吸烟对他们的危害特别大,因为烟草含有4000多种化学物质,对身体成长有负面影响。

  Smoking is particularly dangerous for teens because their bodiesare still developing ( grow ) and the more than 4000 chemicals in cigarette canadversely affect ( influence ) this process.

  减肥的最好方法是减少热量摄入,同时增加活动量。

  The best way to lose weight is to reduce the intake of calorie;at the same time increase the level of physical activity.

  我们应该抛弃一些不良的生活习惯,如烟酒过度,暴饮暴食等。

  We should do away with ( abandon, give up, keep away from ) badliving habits, such as excessive drinking, smoking and overeating.

  应对私家车进行限制,因为汽车排放的有毒气体含有许多已知的致癌物。

  Private cars should be restricted because cars emit toxic gasesthat contain many known carcinogens ( cancer-causing agent ).

  在城市化过程中,砍伐森林和开垦土地是非常普遍的现象,但却破坏了动植物的栖息地。

  In the process of urbanization, deforestation and land clearingare very common, which damage the natural habitats of flora ( plant ) and fauna( animal ).

  由于环境的恶化,许多城市居民患有多种呼吸道疾病,如喉咙痛,肺癌等。

  Due to the deteriorating ( worsen, degenerate ) environment,many city dwellers suffer from respiratory problems, such as sore throat andlung cancer.

  工业废料未经过滤就倾倒到河流里,污染了河流,给附近居民带来巨大的危害。

  The industrial waste is dumped into rivers without beingfiltered, thus contaminating ( pollute, taint ) the rivers and bringing greatharm to the residents nearby.

  我们现在做的是浪费资源,对环境不利的事。

  What we are doing now is wasteful of resources and unfriendly tothe environment.

  垃圾问题对人们的健康构成潜在威胁,因垃圾含有多种细菌,病毒,并且传播流行性疾病。

  The rubbish problem poses potential risks ( endanger, threaten )to people’s health, because trash contains many kinds of germs and viruses andtransmits ( spread ) epidemic diseases.

  写作练习 C6/T2/T2

  题目:Writeabout the following topic:

  Successful sports professionals can earn a great deal more moneythan people in other important professions. Some people think this is fullyjustified while others think it is unfair.

  Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

  Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examplesfrom your own knowledge or experience.

  多层次分析例文(环境/健康面):

  For:首先运动员收入过高这是个事实 + 原因分析:这是市场经济发展,一些社会机构商业运作的结果,同时也承认运动员个人和家庭为了成功也付出了巨大的努力和牺牲。

  •It isindisputable/undeniable that successful sports professionals can earn a greatdeal more money than their counterparts in other fields.

  •Thisphenomenon can be understood from many angles. First of all, it is unavoidablein the market economy. What is more, it is also an indication of the effort andsacrifice sports professionals and their family members pay for their success.

  •Sofrom the aspect of athlete individual, it seems fair.

  Against:但是其他一些重要部门对于人类文明的发展,社会的进步更有意义,因此政府做为社会生活的重要管理者应该承担起必要的作用。举例,比如第一次工业革命中牛顿,瓦特所起的重要推动作用。

  •However,what we must notice is that some other essential professions, such as science,medicine, education and so on, play an equal, perhaps even more significantrole in promoting the development of society. For instance, what greatcontributions Newton and James Watt made in the first industrial revolution!

  •Sogovernment should handle and keep balance among different professions forpushing forward the advancement of human cociety.

  •So,based on a wider horizon, is seems unfair.

  社会的发展是各个行业协调发展,共同进步的结果。如果体育从业人员的收入过高,可能引导青少年产生错误认识,忽视其他重要学科的学习,毕竟人本质上都是自私的,这样对青少年的健康成长不利,也不利于形成健康的社会风气。(健康、环境面)

  •Thehealthy and fast development of society can be achieved only on the conditionthat different fields develop and make progress together in harmony.

  •Ifsports stars get far higher income and greater social status than theprofessionals working in other fields. It can lead teenagers to pay most oftheir attention to sports and try to follow the same career track of theiridols.

  •Afterall, everybody is “selfish” and it is the human nature to pursue better life.

  •Sothis general mood of society can exert negative influence on the healthydevelopment of mankind and the growth of youngsters.

 

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